RULE 3 -- EXAMPLES

Incorrect -- Correct

  • The man, who has too many ties, has too few necks.
  • The man who has too many ties has too few necks.

  • The cats, with six toes, are a unique attraction of the tour of Hemingway's house.
  • The cats with six toes are a unique attraction of the tour of Hemingway's house.



    • RULE 3 -- REFERENCES

    More information about this rule is available from the following sources.

    Online Resources:
  • The Elements of Style: rule 3

    Printed References: (see References section)
  • Strunk and White: 1-3
  • Hacker: P1-e





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