RULE 4 -- EXAMPLES

Incorrect -- Correct

  • After buying the five pound jar of marshmallow spread he set off in search of a bulk portion of peanut butter.
  • After buying the five pound jar of marshmallow spread, he set off in search of a bulk portion of peanut butter.

  • With this he bestows the responsibility of his own happiness on his mother and father.
  • With this, he bestows the responsibility of his own happiness on his mother and father.

  • As she begins to gain independence it is natural for Grete to regard the idea of dependency as repugnant.
  • As she begins to gain independence, it is natural for Grete to regard the idea of dependency as repugnant.


  • RULE 4 -- REFERENCES

    More information about this rule is available from the following sources.

    Printed References: (see References section)
  • Hacker: P1-b




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